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The story is officially done. 213 chapters, maybe 210 pending on how you look at it. Part of me is sad because there was no slice of life after the high school arc. It was just action arc straight into the next action arc.
I, Superman's Younger Brother, got the Thanos Template
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I guess it depends on how good your writing is? Honestly, like i said, it went from one action arc straight to the next. If there were a few chapters in between and maybe extended what literally took a year into 2-4, i think the story would be better. The only problem would be clark wouldnt have been as useless with each new villain. And i dont even know if you are allowed to do something like change the story like that in the middle. I feel like that could be a form of plagiarism but adding side stories at the end could work too and it would be the safer option
TheBoredWriter69:True, I didn't really like the end. It was very quick and unsatisfying. Maybe I will make some Omakes to try my writing skills to make up some slice and life or romance.