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AuthoressChioma
AuthoressChiomaLv111yr
2023-07-11 05:28

Apart from less met updating ..I see no mistakes nor problem in the book.It's a 10/10[img=recommend][img=Loving it]

Masquerade X Demolition

SalomeTadala
4.8
12 Chs

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redlady
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This plot is perfect ! The way you combined the drama action from the first chapters and the love cute moments from flashbacks really give me the sad feeling that Danielle feels !I really want to see more !The novel is unique and well written !With all my sincerity ,I read the whole book with my heart beating in curiosity ! Love you ! Waiting for more !

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Yui_is_tired
Yui_is_tiredLv11

This is a masterpiece. My first time saying so to any novel but it deserves this. Amazing writing, very intriguing, such good indexing (the title avoids you from getting confused), and the chemistry between Dani and Kayden is so gooddddd. From the fight scenes (Dani is very cool i love her) to the romantic ones(Kayden giving her a kiss AAHhHHhH) to the current revelation scene, I was simply spellbound.My only complaint is for author to make more paragraphs for dialogues. Otherwise, *mwah* chef's kiss. Must-read.

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Perfect_praize
Perfect_praizeLv3

Say what you wanna say but the fact still remains that the author is too good. I mean I immediately fell in love with the book just by reading the synopsis

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ForerunnerOfSky
ForerunnerOfSkyLv3

pretty good the writing is super good, personally I didn't realy connect with Danielle, but that was really the only caveat. The writing was super good and the dialogue flows smoothly and doesn't sound clunky or unorganic. Great job overall

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Sinadin
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A different sort of work and the first of this type I've ever read. Seems pretty promising to me. Can't judge anything based on the number of chapters right now. But this has potential. Author! Release more.

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AceAmbrosia
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I was hooked as soon as I opened the first page. The only thing I would suggest is to seperate the speech, but otherwise, the novel is amazing.Keep up the good work!

1yr
littleHua
littleHuaLv12

Wow, the first chapter is filled with such angst! What did you do, author? 😭 Anyway, I like the way you deliver the message of the characters and how the emotions are portrayed!

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IncognitoAngel
IncognitoAngelLv3

An enticing first chapter, and I also love a good sci-fi romance. It's honestly a hooking tale, and I think you should honestly read it.

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CosmicArchmage
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This story is intense! The author's writing style is gripping, and I was immediately drawn into the protagonist's world. The vivid descriptions of the post-apocalyptic setting and the protagonist's inner turmoil create a sense of urgency and intrigue. The action-packed scenes, like the encounter with the intruders and the intense fight, kept me on the edge of my seat!

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Semangat123_5546
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This story is good and has a different writing style. I mean the dialogue part, but still easy to read. Yeah, it's nice story. Good luck, Thor 👍😊.

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