Item: Grave borne Revenant
Rating: 5

Alan_GrimlordAuthor1yr

2023-09-26 07:17

another shameless author review i have made a tik tok if you guys want updates on the series follow @gravebrone my series is heavily inspired by lotm so some concepts from that series will be browwed don't worry I will change it to make it seem more original to my story the mc wont get an oath until chapter 25 or 30 I'm trying to decide on which one for now I wanna build up the world more and build up the character arcs so please be patient also I wanna keep this upload shecdle but for my mental health ima just change it to thursdays and fridays we get new chapters also remember as of now I'm still in high school so when ever i have a test i wont upload on that day it took me like 2 weeks to think of this story i was gonna rush it but i slowed it down and i really like the pace of the story rn i will change up the paceing once Elijah earns an oath so look out for that i also will be creating a discord once i get 3k followers on tiktok

Grave borne Revenant

Alan_Grimlord

4.7

144 Chs

Liked by 1 people

Replies9

JBFIRE_77Lv4

is there romance in this novel? please no it holds back the MC

10mth

Alan_GrimlordAuthor

No, i dont plan on adding romance for the main character, but I will add some side pieces for some side characters later. also merry Christmas if you have any questions I would love to answer them

JBFIRE_77:is there romance in this novel? please no it holds back the MC

10mth

JBFIRE_77Lv4

Merry Christmas to you also

Alan_Grimlord:No, i dont plan on adding romance for the main character, but I will add some side pieces for some side characters later. also merry Christmas if you have any questions I would love to answer them

10mth

JBFIRE_77Lv4

wait author are you from Jamaica?

JBFIRE_77:Merry Christmas to you also
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10mth

Alan_GrimlordAuthor

Yes, why you ask?

JBFIRE_77:wait author are you from Jamaica?

10mth

JBFIRE_77Lv4

As a fellow Jamaican I will fully support your work

Alan_Grimlord:Yes, why you ask?

10mth

Alan_GrimlordAuthor

WWWWWW

JBFIRE_77:As a fellow Jamaican I will fully support your work
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10mth

Alan_GrimlordAuthor

hey, this might not seem like a good idea to ask a fan this book. Could you share my novel with friends as a recommendation or something? is you no wanna then don't answer

JBFIRE_77:As a fellow Jamaican I will fully support your work
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9mth

JBFIRE_77Lv4

Alan_Grimlord:hey, this might not seem like a good idea to ask a fan this book. Could you share my novel with friends as a recommendation or something? is you no wanna then don't answer

9mth

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