A great story I can’t wait until Carnes shows up at MarineFord and starts going ham fights Whitebeard,Sengoku,Garp,and all three Admirals.

The cover and title makes this seem like one of those tragedy/sad story/depressing types, I hate those stories, but this is far from that. This story is really good and the only weak point is his system but it is so well written that you don't mind it. It was a long time ago that I read a one piece story this good. please write more and give us 2 chapters/day

To be fair the System feels a bit forced in my opinion the story would have been greater without the system or with another machenik to recruit crew members trough the system. But apart from that its really the best One Piece Fan Fic i ever Read. Thank you Author fr fr.

Not my cup of tea but it deserves a good rating i like the writing quality the only complaint I have is that it ruined my immersion in the story when demigure uses magic i mean if you write a fanfic stick with the power system of that anime there's really no need to add other anime power system or you could just give him an op fruit with no weakness

Great story man ,you know i've been reading the fic from the start and i thought i gave you 5 star review back then but saw that i haven't . here you go another 5 star review from me

Originally, I gave this two stars, but continued reading. It's a good thing I did, because the novel is one of the few ones where the mc doesn't suddenly become a good guy, but rather follows up on the premise/promise that we got at the start of the novel. Just warning future readers, but canonically important characters actually do get oofed by the mc, and it is quite satisfying. The only part I can really criticize is the system. Don't like some parts of it and the mc seems to be holding back some of the powers that he acquired through it, though that may be because he's hiding them for stronger opponents.

I can't believe no one gives this fanfic reviews!

well it's a good book everything is nice

interesting story, an isekai like no other, having a background and already in the story before it start, also clear goals to accomplish, hope we can see till it's end