decently set up however, in my opinion its really mid, for one, you didnt give him his reincarnation at a young enough age, 12? really, thats boring, i like super detailed stories where the mc grinds from childhood.
Itachi_Writes
Liked it!
LIKE100% understand your viewpoint. But my story is not going to be about hardships. It's about a guy who's already get everything handed to him and his time through the multiverse. I'll be honest I'm not really good at writing about hardship as it takes a good amount of emotional intelligence to understand the pain or struggles of the mc. Me personally never had hardships maybe small ones that would make normal people depressed but I honestly could care less about my life unless I can stay lazy and entertained. That mainly why I wrote like that. But thank for being honest.