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2023-07-24 13:08

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okay so here we go-------Writing quality of the book has been alright in terms grammar mistakes and all that, in my personal observation thus far I haven't really seen any mistakes which means the author really did put work into writing it.-- in terms of story development the author has really added a lot of twists and all that to spice up the story in his own way and even went his way to start the story in a different angle.... but here comes me ranting : I know we were warned that it was a slice of life and a slow burn yet... it really was a sloooooow burn. reading this story taught me that pal slice of life kinda stories ain't for you. not to discredit the author's hardwork but this story tested my perseverance with the overly calm story telling.-- now in terms of character design the author really did put his back into this one, he either really understood the original characters really well or did an amazing job making them slightly AU which I expected from a Fanfiction.--Update stability is something I don't really know how to rate since I kinda read everything in like 2 days soooo you get that.-- world background was also pretty done well.Overall it's a nice story for those interested in slice of life and sloooooow burn if not you would basically die of boredom like I almost did. but as you saw in the synopsis the author wasn't joking when he said it was slice of life and author-san you did an amazing job in your story it just to bland for me thanks and hope to see your book up in thr rating's.

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