Review Detail of Daoist8wV43b in Embers of Resolve: Rise of the Unyielding Hero

In general my favourite written fan fiction work so far. The story is really solid and has a lot of background. As someone that is relatively new to the fan fiction formula instead of a regular OS I feel refreshed reading in general about Jack's story on this Wonderful World. The narrative and general vocabulary the author is using may be kind complex but it never gets boring or uninteresting and it keeps you on your toes so you don't miss anything. If this is something to remark I would like to also address the little notes the author left at the end of every chapter also helps to get the reader's attention with a more personal touch with some funny references even. The characters are well written and its noticeable by the author's fidelity to the original Konosuba's cast but with a little funny and honestly really interesting twist to them in their personality. This is not about the story but it's really nice of the author to keep a regular update basis for the story because that shows he actually cares about what is he/she writing. Still not a Warhammer fanfic so 3/10