Review Detail of nnsn_nhk in Lord Of Succubi:Transmigrated As A Dual Cultivator In Isekai Of Magic

Item: Lord Of Succubi:Transmigrated As A Dual Cultivator In Isekai Of Magic
Rating: 3.6

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It's a great fantasy story, with magic, sword fighting and skill. my only negative point is the excess of pompous words that seem more to increase the text, than to describe the situation.

Lord Of Succubi:Transmigrated As A Dual Cultivator In Isekai Of Magic

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Shunsuke_UchihaLv2Shunsuke_Uchiha

The issue here is that the author is too vivid with his scene description making it come off as a little unnatural. it doesn't flow as smoothly as it should hence it appears too wordy

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