(Read chapters 1–10)Transmigrated Into the Body of the Prince Consort is a good novel (by my standards), with characters easy to understand by the way they spoke and conversed. But that is where I became a bit confused when I first read the story. The use of words during character dialogues is too informal and casual considering who spoke, like using "guys.". I highly suggest replacing "guys" (just my humble opinion). Character dialogue takes up most of the story itself, and the characters are simply narrating the happenings in the story. The description is very vague at various settings. This is not my first time reading an eastern novel setting, but it may confuse readers who have not read similar stories before. Like the "Palace," which could be imagined as a Western Palace or Eastern Palace if not properly described. Overall, for me, this novel is good and only needs a few tweaks here and there (especially the dialogue and setting description).Anyways, keep it up Author(✯ᴗ✯)
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