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Kwetzal_Lag
Kwetzal_LagLv51yr
2023-07-23 14:25

Goodt, very goodt. I enjoy the mc's spirit as well as the story giving me a feeling of fulfillment for reading it. As well as the many creative ways his spirit can be evolved through his spirit ring selection in the future. I recommend

Soul Land: Grasping The Sky

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3PoundsOfRice
3PoundsOfRiceLv5

Make the six eyes a martial soul. It just doesn't make sense for a person to have that kind of ability. Douluo dalu is not that kind of world. If you have a lineage, it manifests as a martial soul. Also you don't need to think too much, you can make each ring represent an improvement in their overall abilities. Or you can also add skills like Huo Yuhao's. It would be easier for you to develop the six eyes with a reference point. Awakening a second martial soul after a few years is something that makes sense within DD. Thanks for the chapters.

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Octovicious
OctoviciousLv4

Update everyday Slave!! For you Lord, your God, Your Maker.... Octovicious!!!Joke~ HAHAHA Hello there, seeing no-one has reviewed it is my duty to do so...hmm... all I say is that the story is great even though its just a few chapters in, and I'm hoping for the author to update constantly and make the chapters longerlove you Author for making a DD fic

1yr
Erl_Rol
Erl_RolLv1

Reveal spoiler

1yr
Domo_Domo_7296
Domo_Domo_7296Lv1

It's good, one of the few good Soul Land Fanfic without an exagegerated cheats

1yr
kovaksens
kovaksensLv1

This work has the potential to be the best DD work [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Darkgravity
DarkgravityLv13

Love the fic,There is not a lot of DD ff so I fully support you, anyway for the people who want a decent review the mc have gloves with chains as his martial soul, and he have a decent cultivation technique(not some supreme god technique) and the six eyes from JJ(not as his martial soul, I think it's just a bloodline). Anyway author I want to know if you will make the mc against Tang san(personaly I don't like tang san like he has a silver grass martial soul and transform it into a poision's grass the silver grass is the peak of vitality he ruined its potential) honestly tang san is not the natural son of destiny I think I hate him bc of this(anyone not knowing, tang san is the split soul of god shura and god shura mobilized the God center to steal the luck of the douluo star and made him ito a an artificial son of destiny) sorry for my ranting -_-

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Soulless_King
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DaoistJRiBtk
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Life_sa_Beach
Life_sa_BeachLv4

Very good read . Like MC's character and the character development and also the fact that he is rational enough to not suck Tang San d

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