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Slothiticus
SlothiticusLv141yr
2023-07-26 22:43

Read ahead in the raws and honestly I was bored the MC has very little personality and the story is mostly pushed forward by other characters which wouldn't be bad if the other characters had decent character development but most of there actions seem very forced without much development. The amount of character is too much for what the story is offering it would have been better to slow the story down a bit to develop a few characters over time before adding more that way its easier to follow and engages the reader emotionally more.

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Dabel_Infinity
Dabel_InfinityLv14

How to get the raw, I am new to such stuffs

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