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BigCheesecake
BigCheesecakeLv151yr
2023-09-06 08:36

The story is good so far but there is one problem the grammar is not that good, By that I mean it is not clear who was talking and when someone stopped talking. Don't expect MC to be a hero he has very loose morals as long as it benefits him even if it causes hundreds of thousands of people to die.

Overwatch: Rise of Rose

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FallenVoid
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By far the fic I look forward to the most, I’ve always wanted an OW fic that actually takes place in universe instead of simply being OW concepts in other places. I pray that it is written to completion because I’m extremely hyped about this.

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Rusty_noddle12
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I think the dialog and interactions between characters in the story are like a bad mix of concrete, missing something, has too much or too little of something, and I end up just slogging through it in hopes it gets better; basically the characters lack charater, leading to stiff conversation. It's probably just me being used to stories where you can see the MCs character all over the story, and even in a different pov you see the changes that were about by interacting with MC.

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Cobias_Tenem
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AkashicLibrary
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Best OW fanfic ive read so far. No grammar mistakes. Some might not like the story due to OCs beside the mc but the author developed the story well at least so far

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Daoist1qoUfV
Daoist1qoUfVLv3

this is a great fanfic of ow if not the best one ive seen with the character development in recent chapters as long as you stick with the development and the cruelty of war then youll be good

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Ekhemos
EkhemosLv14

I loved it till now and I hope Author will not drop this fanfiction, it is rare to see an Overwatch fic so I hope Author will finish this fanfiction without dropping 😁.

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WizardReader
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I read the story the writings good but i could not understand some choices the MC make. You keep trying to force him in a situation he can avoid. Why would you let him cooperate with the police during the war we know the law enforcement are incompetent and he also brought the girl with who has no help at all. You portrayed him to be intelligent yet he keeps making illogical decsions. This isn't how a smart person thinks at all. Even if he underestimated the decision he still chooses to handle the situation through emotion. Sorry i cant continue reading, despite habving great writing.

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