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2023-09-26 22:25

Dude, you could make a great Bakugan novel, this story about half human and half Bakugan is boring, you have talent, you could make a Bakugan isekai that would be good, PS your character is too angry at some moments, that's exhausting, that's just my personal opinion

Rise of the Half-Bakugan

MoonWarriorr
4.7
71 Chs

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MoonWarriorr
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Thank you for your comment. First of all, it would be good if you explain how you find it boring. If it has to do with the character's anger, please allow me to explain myself. His memories are largely fragmented and because of that his personality is not stabilized. The half-Bakugan side of him also contributes to this, making him angry. As a result of the combination of all this, he sometimes gets angry or has extreme mood swings. In the second season or volume, these changes will end. Thank you for your kind words of praise.

1yr
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MoonWarriorr
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Hello friends. It was me, Dio! Just kidding, I'm Moon. Welcome to the remake of Bakugan. First of all, I have radically changed the system - which was my main purpose - and I am editing and re-presenting some issues that readers claim to be uncomfortable with. If there are things you don't like, if you have questions, if you want to express your opinion about the issues that you think are important, you can leave it under my review as a comment.

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Fernrir_Zero999
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I love you idea and bakugan m, so I truste you

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Let's be honest. If your friend was a writer, you'd give him a 5-point review. Since I'm still not close to the limit of writing a review, I'll say only one thing. Give the book a chance.

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Finding good and interesting bakugan fanfiction is now difficult, especially with isekai, but here I find an interesting fanfic and with an interesting idea I wish you good luck and mood for its continuation. [img=recommend] [img=recommend]

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story is very good and mc is a good character

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Read, my friend. Read... If you don't, you'll regret it later.

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