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2023-07-09 09:59

La historia es buena. Muy buena, todo el argumento y el protagonista estan bien hecho. El mundo si hay que trabajarlo un poco, ya que se siente que no vive realmente en DC universe. En mi opinión eso se arreglaría colocando más reacciones por parte de otras personas, las autoridades y otros superhéroes a la existencia del MC. Y por último, el protagonista se siente como si fuera hombre. Osea... No hace referencia a su reacción a cómo es vivir de repente como mujer o lo que quiso decir Dios cuando dijo que había una especie de magia para tener relaciones. Pero apenas es el cuarto capítulo, así que se entiende. Espero el autor esté bien y pueda mantener la historia. Y por favor trata de decidir si te es posible publicar de forma semanal o varios capítulos por semana.

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