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TheLordOfEdge
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2023-08-25 18:52

At the start, I didnt really like the mc. But the character development was really good. Now I think its one of the really good novels. I want to see how it continues :)

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I HOPE THE AUTHOR READS THE COMMENTS AND I HOPE U READ THIS ONE ESPECIALLY BECAUSE I THINK IT CAN HELP U WITH NEW IDEAS OR TO PUT THIS INTO AFFECT INTO THE BOOK!! I JUST READ CHAPTER 27 AND I LOVED IT!! I LOVE THIS BOOK SO MUCH I HOPE U KEEP IT GOINGFOR A LONG TIME!! KEEP IT UP!! I JUST HOPE THAT THE MC GETS MORE ELEMENTS MAYBE BY EATING HEARTS OF BEASTS THAT HAVE ELEMENTS AND IF HE KEEPS EATING THEM OVER AND OVER THE ELEMENT WILL GET STRONGER LIKE THE LIGHTNING ELEMENT IF HE EATS ENOUGH HEARTS ITS WILL BECOME GOLD OR BLACK OR WHATEVER SAME GOSE FOR THE REST OF THE ELEMENTS!! AND HE SHOULD GET HIS MOTHER AND SISTER IN THE DUNGEON AS WELL SO THIS WAY THEY ALL CAN MAKE MONEY AND HE SHOULD TELL BOTH OF THEM THE TRUTH AND HE SHOULD FACE HIS MOM FIRST AND TAKE CARE OF THAT PROBLEM!! AND HE SHOULD START A BUSINESS IN THE REAL WORLD TO GAIN MORE MONEY BUT IT WILL BE USELESS IN THE FUTURE OR HE SHOULD TAKE ALL OF THE THINGS HE GETS AND START TO HAVE SCIENTISTS START TO MAKE NEW THINGS OUT OF THE THKNGS HE BRINGS BACK AS SOON AS THE DUNGEONS APPEAR THIS WAY HE CAN CAPITALIZE ON THE HOLE SITUATION AND BE THE LEADING COMPANY AND MAKE MONEY IN THE REAL WORLD THIS WAY TOO AND THE HE CAN STILL GO TO THE DUNGEON AND RANK UP AND MAKE MORE MONEY AND EVERYTHING!! AND HE SHOULD GET A CHANCE TO GET LIKE GOD WEREWOLF BLOOD SO HE CAN BECOME EVEN STRONGER AND EVENTUALLY TURN INTO A GOD ALONG WITH ALL OF THE GIRLS HES WITH AND HIS MOTHER AND HE SHOULD GET A FAMILIAR (WOLF) AND HAVE IT HAVE A GODS BLOODLINE IN IT TO BUT HAVE THE MC RECEIVE IT AS AN EGG OR FIND IT IN ONE OF THE DUNGEONS AND HAVE HIM DO THE FAMILIAR CEREMONY THIS WAY IT WONT TURN ON HIM AND AFTER HE RAISES IT IT BECOMES HUGE LIKE A 10-100 STORY BUILDING AND HAS ICE AND LIGHTNING ELEMENTS AND THEN LET THE GIRLS EITHER HAVE THE SAME FAMILIARS LIKE THEY ALL HAVE PHOENIXS BUT WITH DIFFERENT ELEMENTS THAT MATCH EACH GIRL OR THEY EACH HAVE THERE OWN FAMILIAR THAT IS SUPPER SUPPER POWERFUL AND BUG JUST LIKE THE MCS THIS WAY THEY CANE BE PROTECTED AGAINST ANYTHING AND THE FAMILIARS CAN CHANGE THERE SIZES SO ITS NOT SO INCONVENIENT FOR WHERE THEY GO AND THEY CAN ALSO CROSS INTO THE REAL WORLD WITH THE MC AND THE GIRLS SO THEY CAN TAKE CARE OF THEM AND SO THERE NOT LEFT ALONE WHEREVER THEY (LOG OUT) TYPE OF THING!!!

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