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The whole story is kind of dry. Its better than machine translation do doubt, but not it feels like its short of reaching the next grade. Also some places are quite difficult to understand. Sorry translator san, for dropping it. It would be better if you read it whole , and then write it adding a bit of your own creativity.

My Right As the Hokage is Unlimited

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As for the places that are confusing, honestly, I'm also confused. If I change the fanfic or add something, I feel like it's ruining the contents of the original fanfic and is disrespectful to the author. Also, is the story drier than cereal?