To be honest story in of itself is pretty good but the author needs to practice his grammar a lil bit since a lot of it is fast-paced.Either way keep on writing eventually you'll get better at it đ
Marioni
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Mtl Name?
Itâs a translation
Konoha Of The Heavens: Conquer All Worlds Starting From The Chat Group
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