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Kyatus
KyatusLv1511mth
2024-04-20 02:00

This story has a good concept and world building as well as some interesting characters. The biggest issue is the writing quality and just the slow development that occurs due to the writing. The author, at least for the majority of volume 1, is constantly info dumping during dialogue. This makes what would usually be a very interesting story a massive slog to read through. I want to enjoy this and read it but the constant unnecessary info dumps or the massive paragraphs of the MC repeating his motive that we already know every chapter is very annoying. Another thing that set me off was when the character just randomly decided to use a bunch of money to mess with the church. This action was then praised by his butler but to me this just seemed super petty and unimportant to the people he is trying to mess with. Overall: Again the world is very interesting and it is very clear that the author is very proud of it. The issue is he wants to show off as much of the world as soon as possible which is ruining the pacing of the story in the beginning puts me and probably others as well off of the novel.

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Thanks for the honest feedback.

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Luohuo
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Making this review based of volume 1 alone. I give this book 4 to 4.5 stars. i personally do like this novel quite a lot but the dialogs between character do need improvement. You will notice that characters speak quite a lot to be consider to be a healthy conversation between two characters. 70 to 80 percent of the time the dialogs are glorified info dumps for readers but just learn how to pa* through crucial information and it will be fine. mc is pretty good, he is batsht cruel and very cunning to say the least and given the sneak peak we got for what's gonna happen in volume 2 and 3, i can say mc will become strong really fast so if u like op mc then you will like this. but do keep in mind, when i say op mc i mean in a very loose sense coz you will know just how vast the world is very early on (chapter 17-18) so in the grand scheme of things, he is not stupidly strong or anything. all most all the characters can pretty much obliterate mc is a normal one vs one fight were to happen as mc himself is only 2 days old since becoming a vampire so yea, he has a lot to grow and has really obnoxiously strong abilities which used correctly will put him in the upmost strongest character in all of stories as whole (that is if author does continue with the story which i am not taking any guarantee for haha). the vampires in this world are pure evil and so is mc, so if don't like setting like those, please do yourself a favor and not read it its not for the kind souls out their. (read the extra chapters for more details). the world and how vast this novel verse is explained in details while author has kept a lot of information hidden for later date but with what's told. I will give you a general gist for what i understood personally. mc lives in a universe which has 16-d (aka 16 layers of 'bigger infinity' then previous ones) so in general vs battle terminology, his base universe is a 1-b structure on its own. And there are infinite number of universes inside one omniverse (yes that one from marvel). And there are infinite number of omniverses inside one 'seed' (yes a seed of any fruit for imagination) and there are infinite seeds inside a single fruit. Now there are uncountable infinite number of fruits that are connected to the 'tree of knowledge' (imagine any universal tree which is structurally so 'large' that you cannot even possibly count the sheer amount of fruits that tree has). So what i am saying is, this verse is maive. And i thought the author of 'instant death' was high on drugs but this author here just make him look like a pleb. So anyway with a world so vast and mc having boundless potential all i can say is i expect mc to grow to probably the strongest if not one of the strongest mc known in any novel ever. overall i like it and do recommend it to anyone who got even slightest bit interested while reading the review. and hopefully this series will continue and not get dropped or deleted.

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