Review Detail of SuohDaoist in Harry Potter: The Golden Viper
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honestly was great till the author started glazing up harry and forced the mc to start looking after harry and essentially adopting him. again, another author who fails to realize most readers are tired of fanfics that focus on harry or give harry so much screen time and importance, they like the wizarding world and lore more than Harry. why even bother to write if you're just gonna make it about harry again 🤦🏻♂️
Harry Potter: The Golden Viper
FicFrenzy
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FicFrenzy:Because its harry potter, hes the savior its destiny or fate, he must be the one to kill Voldemort and MC knows that Voldemort's rise is inevitable, in the original plot there are plot holes and many things happening due to luck, which is not possible or maynot happen in real world scenarios. Mc will have to help harry if he wants to KILL voldy I don't want to say spoilers but if you have read to latest chapters you can guess what's dumbledore trying to do with/to MC. As i have been saying when there's hogwarts arc then screen time will be divided between mc, harry sometimes dumbledore in the future in key canon plot events, i dedicated a whole arc where the perspective was on mc and oc character, but the story's foundation is hogwarts and canon events, mc will have to participate in those otherwise only OC events will make it boring for you readers, and now the 3rd book plot events are going in which, In one hand MC does certain things that affect the wizarding word and Harry and hogwarts characters react.
Because its harry potter, hes the savior its destiny or fate, he must be the one to kill Voldemort and MC knows that Voldemort's rise is inevitable, in the original plot there are plot holes and many things happening due to luck, which is not possible or maynot happen in real world scenarios. Mc will have to help harry if he wants to KILL voldy I don't want to say spoilers but if you have read to latest chapters you can guess what's dumbledore trying to do with/to MC. As i have been saying when there's hogwarts arc then screen time will be divided between mc, harry sometimes dumbledore in the future in key canon plot events, i dedicated a whole arc where the perspective was on mc and oc character, but the story's foundation is hogwarts and canon events, mc will have to participate in those otherwise only OC events will make it boring for you readers, and now the 3rd book plot events are going in which, In one hand MC does certain things that affect the wizarding word and Harry and hogwarts characters react.
Ofc events make it boring? not the same repeated events ? it's not fate or destiny that harry has to kill vold, it's plot armour. doing the same thing as many authors do, glaze up harry because the author likes harry and his oc basically becomes an insert 😂
FicFrenzy:Because its harry potter, hes the savior its destiny or fate, he must be the one to kill Voldemort and MC knows that Voldemort's rise is inevitable, in the original plot there are plot holes and many things happening due to luck, which is not possible or maynot happen in real world scenarios. Mc will have to help harry if he wants to KILL voldy I don't want to say spoilers but if you have read to latest chapters you can guess what's dumbledore trying to do with/to MC. As i have been saying when there's hogwarts arc then screen time will be divided between mc, harry sometimes dumbledore in the future in key canon plot events, i dedicated a whole arc where the perspective was on mc and oc character, but the story's foundation is hogwarts and canon events, mc will have to participate in those otherwise only OC events will make it boring for you readers, and now the 3rd book plot events are going in which, In one hand MC does certain things that affect the wizarding word and Harry and hogwarts characters react.
FicFrenzy:Because its harry potter, hes the savior its destiny or fate, he must be the one to kill Voldemort and MC knows that Voldemort's rise is inevitable, in the original plot there are plot holes and many things happening due to luck, which is not possible or maynot happen in real world scenarios. Mc will have to help harry if he wants to KILL voldy I don't want to say spoilers but if you have read to latest chapters you can guess what's dumbledore trying to do with/to MC. As i have been saying when there's hogwarts arc then screen time will be divided between mc, harry sometimes dumbledore in the future in key canon plot events, i dedicated a whole arc where the perspective was on mc and oc character, but the story's foundation is hogwarts and canon events, mc will have to participate in those otherwise only OC events will make it boring for you readers, and now the 3rd book plot events are going in which, In one hand MC does certain things that affect the wizarding word and Harry and hogwarts characters react.
HymnofIdris:Bro it's called Harry Potter not stories of a OC in the British Wizarding world.
It will be confusing to write a harry potter fanfiction liked by everyone in which there is no emphasis on the golden trio, The OC events will make it confusing and less interesting than if a SI is in plot events of Harry potter. That's why when theres's plot events which is mostly in school time, i don't introduce OC events maybe some slight changes and of course MC is involved so there will be big ovrerall change and OC events are focused in the vacation or before new school year starts like the Druid Arc one.
SuohDaoist:bro the MC ain't Harry Potter, otherwise the author could just write harry as the mc 🤡
tbh i always had my problems with that Prophecy scheme in HP regarding a multiversal traveler, because i dont think that those prophecies are strong enough to affect the Multiverse. so SI transmigrators, who appear after the creation of those prophecies, shouldnt be bound by them and be able to ignore and destroy them easily.
the prophecy scheme is more like plot amour tbhHarrys role was literally to die so he can remove Voldemorts soul in his scar, that's it 😂 everything else is just lucky coincidences and plot.For sure his role after an oc should be lessened, not increased.Harry Potter ff writers don't understand, they just fanboy too much.
Lerynia:tbh i always had my problems with that Prophecy scheme in HP regarding a multiversal traveler, because i dont think that those prophecies are strong enough to affect the Multiverse. so SI transmigrators, who appear after the creation of those prophecies, shouldnt be bound by them and be able to ignore and destroy them easily.
FicFrenzy:It will be confusing to write a harry potter fanfiction liked by everyone in which there is no emphasis on the golden trio, The OC events will make it confusing and less interesting than if a SI is in plot events of Harry potter. That's why when theres's plot events which is mostly in school time, i don't introduce OC events maybe some slight changes and of course MC is involved so there will be big ovrerall change and OC events are focused in the vacation or before new school year starts like the Druid Arc one.
I will try, try to add romance i thought of tonks as a love interest first but lupin is a bit miserable you know. So, iam thinking of others and if there is not a suitable female character in the future, there will be no romance.
Tyler_Henline_7485:is there romance
FicFrenzy:I will try, try to add romance i thought of tonks as a love interest first but lupin is a bit miserable you know. So, iam thinking of others and if there is not a suitable female character in the future, there will be no romance.
FicFrenzy:I will try, try to add romance i thought of tonks as a love interest first but lupin is a bit miserable you know. So, iam thinking of others and if there is not a suitable female character in the future, there will be no romance.
wouldn't tonks be two years younger then MC if so the way you could introduce how tonks knows MC is him helping her deal with the rumors about her that spreaded around during her time at Hogwarts because she nearly dropped out because how bad it got
FicFrenzy:I will try, lets see. I don't want to force it so...