Interesting concept. But poorly written. Main character is too overpowered right at the start. And the other two wishes besides Ghost Rider powers are too.. weird. Mastery of all talents? That's too OP. Looking like an anime character in the world of Twilight/The Originals? Too out of place. Upgrading computers and creating your own AI days after arriving in that world? Very ridiculous. You gotta take things slow man. Do some character building. Don't give him everything right from the very start. And make things a bit more realistic to the world setting.

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Just poorly executed and OPMC right off the rip nothing soecial or good here it's rushed and poorly thought out he gets 3 wishes and 1 is Master of ALL talents and immediately ruins any interest in the fic by building a AI right off the bat nah I'm out this is gonna be a jumbled mess and I'm not sticking around to watch the Dumpster fire burn

Would have been great if the author was someone else. The story has potential but is horribly rushed by the author. The grammar is awful and confusing. Half the time you don’t know who’s talking because there are no clues. The mc himself seems really dumb and useless. The whole story is trash and although I get what the author is trying to do it’s poorly executed.

Hey , you know. good twillight fanfictions are very rare. And i really like the ghost riderxtl idea so please dont give up this story bro. I know its very hard in prime time. I hope you keep writing this story.... ..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

Remainder:- If you want to read this ff then turn off your brain 🧠 i think the author is 12 or 13 years old naming sense 🤢 it's like whatever mc is ok.

Great story poor execution. needs to be rewritten and the story needs to slow WAAAY down. the first 30 chapters that I read was like reading a synopsis of the actually story.

So far, great mixture of characters , plenty of material for more jobs, truly hoping this book far and long with a satisfying completion as a cherry on top of this beautiful sundae.

Would have been good but the author spends more time describing things than any conversations or char building, I'm fine with OP MC's if they are written well for e.g. him being lead away and his main issues is being there to save people and not the actual fight, that is a good way to write an OP MC, but in the first episode he has skills way beyond the Ghost rider, casually making an AI for no reason, making a company for no reason (he's the damn Ghost Rider ffs), a harem for no reason, and the author really made me read a copy n paste of IT's script for nearly 4 whole chapters are you insane, we don't want half the content to be like that, stick with the 2 you started with, Twilight and The Originals.

I’m both happy and annoyed to read this book. The reason why I am happy is because it’s an awesome book 👍🏾🫶🏽😊. The reason I’m annoyed is because the author only uploads two chapters a week 😭.