the writing quality it pretty good. the harem and smut just degrade the story. always does. the "love" aspect of the relationships are always forced and make the mc seem like some sort of god to the harem members (Evelyn was the most obnoxious example in this novel). its weird and creepy, especially with how you have written smut, making it obvious the motivation is routed outside of romance. far too many explanation chapters, almost made me quit at the start with the back to back explanations on the system that could have been explained in a sentence or two, this problem is exemplified when you give the system conscious thought that forces weird and annoying dialogue that ads nothing to the story. even outside the annoying system and creepy smut, you have even more filler chapters that add nothing. so its like 40% filler boredom. and then this is just IMO, but the movies/books/etc that you chose werent the best, even the primary story chapters were mostly boring. idk, this seems to me to be one of the worse "hollywood/director/actor" stories.
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