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Hunter_101
Hunter_101Lv131yr
2023-07-06 00:57

sometime it doesn't just make sense and the dude kinda talks to his system five chapters completely

Hollywood: Head-Hunting System

TheRamenLord
4.3
141 Chs

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TheRamenLord
TheRamenLordAuthor

thanks for the feedback, those were the system introduction and exploring chapters after that you will see that there is almost no system interaction, keeping it to a bare minimum. And you are right the internal monologue chapter should have been spaced apart instead of it being crammed together in 5 back to back chapters but i have learnt from that and improved i think. thanks for reading my work, its my first time writing. I hope you read my latest chapters and see that i have not made the same mistakes. I hope you have a beautiful day 😁👍

1yr
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Santy_Melay
Santy_MelayLv1

Si, y cada vez que entro para darle un oportunidad, no puedo, porque no soporto la interacción con el sistema.

1yr
2
Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4

Delete to the system. Elimina a el sistema.

TheRamenLord:thanks for the feedback, those were the system introduction and exploring chapters after that you will see that there is almost no system interaction, keeping it to a bare minimum. And you are right the internal monologue chapter should have been spaced apart instead of it being crammed together in 5 back to back chapters but i have learnt from that and improved i think. thanks for reading my work, its my first time writing. I hope you read my latest chapters and see that i have not made the same mistakes. I hope you have a beautiful day 😁👍
1yr
1
WizardGhospy
WizardGhospyLv12

thanks for the waring, i hate sentient system the most

1yr
1
EyeOfSilver
EyeOfSilverLv13

thanks for the constructive feedback i will definitely reflect on it and try to improve my writing. 😁👍

5mth
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UniVerseLessOne
UniVerseLessOneLv4

It'll be quite interesting to see where you and this project will develop into.With that said... thanks for the novel and keep up the great work.

1yr

DaoistReader
DaoistReaderLv3

When i read the synopsis of this book i was hyped. This felt just like those chinese novels, where the main character tries to take over Hollywood. I was hyped, i went straight into read the chapters. The effort you put into the research of these Hollywood or directing related stuff. I have only seen author UniVerseLessOne do it, and his Hollywood novel is some of the best i have seen. You need to show more human interaction Ramen-sama, i know introducing the system and all its capabilities is important and cant be rushed or it will create plot holes and inconsistencies. So i will be patient, normally i never write a review for a novel this early i have read only 5 chapters of your work. But i have read the promise you made to the readers in your author's note. Please see this work to the end. I will be sending my power stones to show my love for this work. And if possible create a pat E. Ron where i can read advanced chapters because i need more. Thanks writing this amazing working

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Kancha_T
Kancha_TLv4

A story where the system will not spoon feed the MC and pave him an easy road to success. The hero of our story has to work hard, think and plan properly and struggle to achieve his dreams and success... Loved the system and how it's to be used as a guiding tool by the MC. The grammar is spot on except for a few minute things. All in all this story is going to be epic...

1yr
Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4

In my opinion, the story would be better doing this: 1.- Eliminate the system or reduce 99% of your interaction with the protagonist. 2.- Eliminate artificial intelligence from the system, meaning that the system must have intelligence equal to a 1997 calculator. 3.-Lastly, the protagonist's wealth is absurd but the worst thing is that he simply doesn't do anything funny. The protagonist is not a millionaire, he is a billionaire, I did the math and with current inflation, he could be a billionaire in 2020. So a normal person in our world would be enjoying all the luxuries with that wealth and would not waste time on stupidity by studying or work, because you can hire others to do the boring things.

1yr
Kaizou_Koi
Kaizou_KoiLv4

I really like this novel.Man it is one of the best showbiz novel out there.Moreover I like that the author is very active and takes the reader's advice or suggestion seriously. Author I hope that you can finish this novel completely,,,not leave it midway like dreamthree.Finally the only thing I don't like about this novel is it's slow updates

10mth
Siuuu
SiuuuLv4

I just feel that this novel is very less realistic and some chapters are very confusing. The power system with the SYSTEM makes the story more chaotic.The first 5-7 chapters were good but after that they became boring as MC achieved many things by that moment.I don't know why but it feels that the story doesn't have much depth like its pretty bland for me. The conversation between chaaracters is also very monotonous.This novel is not bad.Its Ok novel to pass some time.

1yr
ThePandaCritic
ThePandaCriticLv1

The staring of the story had me hooked but with the introduction of the system I had my doubts but with the powers of the system the story became meh. I don't like the idea of him reading the taught of people seems like an OP cheat also him figuring out how the females around feel so early spoiled it for me because he didn't really have to work n figure it out, the system plays such a major help to him which to me it should've simply been there as just an aid have him work out everything. this story would've been awesome without the system or simply a system whos, not an all-knowing AI

1yr
TheRamenLord
TheRamenLordAuthor

I cant give myself a 5 star rating not when i know i have more to grow and improve. Hopefully you all will be watching me on this journey. Supporting and cheering me on.

1yr
Tim_QQQ
Tim_QQQLv1

the writing quality it pretty good. the harem and smut just degrade the story. always does. the "love" aspect of the relationships are always forced and make the mc seem like some sort of god to the harem members (Evelyn was the most obnoxious example in this novel). its weird and creepy, especially with how you have written smut, making it obvious the motivation is routed outside of romance. far too many explanation chapters, almost made me quit at the start with the back to back explanations on the system that could have been explained in a sentence or two, this problem is exemplified when you give the system conscious thought that forces weird and annoying dialogue that ads nothing to the story. even outside the annoying system and creepy smut, you have even more filler chapters that add nothing. so its like 40% filler boredom. and then this is just IMO, but the movies/books/etc that you chose werent the best, even the primary story chapters were mostly boring. idk, this seems to me to be one of the worse "hollywood/director/actor" stories.

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