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Ryan_42
Ryan_42Lv141yr
2023-06-13 15:54

Really unnatural, the plot points are very forced and feel completely unrealistic. Plot points and character interactions are just shoe-horned in without care. For example when MC meets team 7 outside of the village. The author could have had the interaction happen after the encounter with the ninjas, with them being on edge due to it giving them a much better incentive for them attacking the MC.

I'm Kizaru in Konoha

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Insta_username
Insta_usernameLv2

Just pure dumb forced plot fic. A man who has hidden himself from ninja world just got to meet team 7 before wave mission just outside the gate of konoha. And naruto and sasuke attacked him for no reason what so ever and sasuke even gave a killing blow and kakashi let them be then MC showed speed which kakashi(best jonin of konoha) can't detect and MC wanna fight naruto and sasuke to see how much better is he from them Why? It was stated in chapter 1 that MC is elite jonin so why would he fight 2 canon fodder level naruto and sasuke? I just wanna bang my head after reading 3-4 chapters

1yr

TruthHurtsX1000
TruthHurtsX1000Lv2

Garbage..forced plot. Mc is not original..no brain cells written ff that just copy and paste..................nothing interesting happens and there is 0 creativity

1yr
Yardigan
YardiganLv2

So far this is a 5 star novel, but before I get further infested into this, I would like to know if this has romance, if yes, is it a single love interest or is the character going to be picking up multiple girls for no logical reason. It's not that I'm against harem novels, I'm just tired of seeing every single novel about an mc with 2 or more girls.

1yr
Endo_Cero
Endo_CeroLv1

5 star review, you will find the reasons by reading the novel😏 PS: I like the mc and the power he has.... powerful but not broken❤️❤️❤️😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏

1yr
SwordGod007
SwordGod007Lv5

Although there are only 6 chapters, the story is good, with very few grammatical errors and fairly long chapters. I hope you will continue to write such quality chapters and finish the story. I also want to know the origin of his powers, I mean, do we get to know why the MC has Kizaru's powers?

1yr
ThinDeer
ThinDeerLv4

Is this an original or a translation?

1yr
MonkeyOfAle
MonkeyOfAleLv4

I couldn't bring myself to read more than a few chapters, this is genuinely horrible, just don't read this.I am legitimately unsure as to whether or not there is any sort of thought process that guides the plot's development.

1yr
Gd_Sys
Gd_SysLv4

moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

1yr
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