Review Detail of Myst_10 in Taking the Mafia to the Magic World

trash clich'e.Copied from cultivation novels,fantasy novels and put in some wannabe mafia thing.Mafias dont work the way you write.Maybe you are catering to a much younger audience but the older the person reading this novel will find loopholes fast and just feel like its garbage.You seem to think peoples mind are one dimensional its more complex than that.Have you not heard of the story about the golden egg laying goose.The farmer kills the golden layin goose to find more gold eggs but it there is none.I dont want to go on a rant i will just stop you can write it the way you want.