Shameless 5 star review! This is my second project, and will continue alongside "The Horatius Era." The story is not set in the same universe, and is vastly different from my first story. However, it is from the same author, so if you liked "The Horatius Era," please give "PNCV" a chance.

I really like the pace of the story: it's developing fast enough, the actions and the character's thoughts+descriptions have a perfect balance. It's easy to follow and I already want to know what's next, even though it's only the beginning [img=recommend]

Interesting plot as well as plot. Well-constructed dialogues between characters, but doing 2 characters in 1st person can pull the reader down. And it's so interesting what happens next.

Only three chapters so far, but I'm hooked. The author builds characters that are really fleshed out. The MC, Noah, comes across as a realistic teenage character from the very first chapter. The interaction between him and his father are well done and believable to the point that even though the dad is nagging at him, you can see between the lines that it's because he cares. And again, even though it's only three chapters, I can already see signs of foreshadowing of things to come, I dig the knowledge of greek mythology I'm already seeing. Keep up the good work author. Hope to see another chapter soon!

love the fast pace and the creativity of each character, giving me the illusion that they are indeed real characters. though the book just started, I see it going a long way... and frequent updates will definitely increase the book's publicity.

Interesting plot and good writing ,so far it is good and waiting for more chapters.

I'm no professional reviewer, so there isn't much for me to point out. Characters, world, direction. All of the are fantastic. The world seems vast, and I can already see so much content to be explored. Characters show potential depth through the dialogue alone, and personally, Leo seems cool. Of course, the main character is well written from what I can see. Direction of the story looks extremely promising and I'm hoping it continues to advance and deliver well. All and all, I had to talk about what the contents of the story since the way information is shown really intrigued me. Keep writing this story, I'm already a fan!

Well what can I say .. the book has good background of ML and interesting side character.It is easy to read it and the story has a good plot. I really liked it. Keep going !

I read the chapters and I can say that this story gone be interesting. Loving the plot, the character, the background everything. [img=update]