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this story was one of my favorite at start. then everything went to downhill aftrr 100 smthin chapters. the love between mcs feels almost sickening now, the starting was really good, i am crying here, why did the story go so bad like this. the side characters are almost 1d, there was this vise prec guy, his intro was good, but wat tf is happening with him? why is there no fight r smthing. ahhhh. and the latest scenes are soon frickin cringe ultra max pro, so he has to fricking get the vote from everyone, they r frickin students, u shitass management should decide whether they should go out or not shits. and, is the Mc like intelligent or smthing? I don't remember the author showing us that he is intelligent, only that his perspective and actions are unorthodox and unprepedictable. then y tf is a thug allowed to manage this whole affair, if u tell me that his mother is asking him to do this and teaching him by the process, then okay, what the fk is elara doing? other than showing her mental illness they call love via skinship. ugh, I had a lot of hope for this one, but this got very annoying real fast after ch 100~. welll, if u want to give it a read I'd recommend till before they join the academy, it'll be real good.

Magic's Return: I Can See The Spirits

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sry it was somewhere like 200 smthing ig.