Review Detail of LuRai in The good for nothing little miss

Writing Quality: There's a lot of switching between past and present tense, and the sentence structure needs a bit of work as well. There is also a lot of information that can be omitted, a lot of the information you give doesn't need to be in the chapters during the story, but instead can be left as a note. The third person is a little tricky, once you decide if you're using past or present tense it does get easier! Great job with what you've done though Story development: I was a little lost after chapter 35, there is a lot of information coming at readers that doesn't quite make sense. I'm hoping further down the line it will begin to click, but the story is developing with grace other than that. Character design: For the FL I was a bit confused at first, she was first described as a goddess, then a cultivator, then a thief, and then a fallen god. I'm also unsure of how she lived for 2000 years but her reactions to things are a bit immature unless gods age differently. The love story mentioned was also very cute but seems a bit extreme for a first date unless they had known each other prior. Over I love the character names and visual descriptions you're doing great :)