Not even gonna lie to you right now, your synopsis is pretty terrible. Not as bad as short synopsis’s or one’s that say “Watch as ____ makes his way through the world 🤓”, but nevertheless, it’s not really far above those either. Anyways. The story was pretty mid as well, but not unenjoyable.
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Well, thank you for your honesty. I'll find a way to improve the synopsis. I also agree that it might be too long, and the story is meant to be a good pastime, so being average is enough. However, I'll do my best to take it from average to good or even great.
Did you change the Synopsis? if not, then you don't need to...
eprins:Well, thank you for your honesty. I'll find a way to improve the synopsis. I also agree that it might be too long, and the story is meant to be a good pastime, so being average is enough. However, I'll do my best to take it from average to good or even great.image
i already changed on the day he mentioned it, i always try to fix or improve something when it's mentioned to me, and in this case, he was actually right so I altered it.
Vince_Gregorie:Did you change the Synopsis? if not, then you don't need to...
I rarely see authors listening to the reader's comments and suggestions while actively interacting with them, Good Job and keep up the good work!!
eprins:i already changed on the day he mentioned it, i always try to fix or improve something when it's mentioned to me, and in this case, he was actually right so I altered it.
thanks I hope you're digging story
Vince_Gregorie:I rarely see authors listening to the reader's comments and suggestions while actively interacting with them, Good Job and keep up the good work!!
