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It is as good as it is bad. The pace and development prove how far and well Avan prepared this story to be. Yet, it also shows that this story was written or ended up in a tunnel-vision. Every scene itself might look exciting to fantasize about but in the world-spectrum, as a whole, it looks like another teenager's idea. Doesn't take much more than 7-8 chapters to bury this book prematurely. And in my opinion, it is these 2 chapters especially that show how well-thought-through this story setting is. PS: It's not been thought through well enough.

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Re: Apocalypse Game

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jesuds
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took the words out of my mouth

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thank u for the comment, but the game not even started untill chapter 9 though..

jesuds:took the words out of my mouth