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2023-09-05 02:51

the story concept was good but the execution is terrible, the story starts quite well (I ignore chapter 1) mc was a criminal mastermind and is set by the shield as the greatest danger because a mobster has mentioned his name (it is already clear that he will go evil), mc continues his life until he tries to rob a particle accelerator (the thing to steal unknown and the author didn't bother to explain), gets hit by dark matter and connects to the force of speed, he also meets the speed force and talks to him and also explains the infinity gems, his power does not seem to be a secret because everyone knows what he uses and what powers he has (don't ask me how but everyone knows) mc is in the mcu and then after the battle of new york with the avengers for a mistake he goes to 616 and can easily defeat doctor strange and other bosses when he barely gets to mach 60, there is also the fact that with mach 3 he can't dodge a bazooka and for some reason loki kills a group of homeless, the shield becomes stupid for plot reasons, in short, various plots and theories that are one worse than the other, he also takes random costumes and power-ups (no one knows him but they already have suits and tachyons for him), mc expert in various fields of study does not use intelligence to use power but goes to sensations (yes, practically an idiot), the plot also talks about how op the force of speed is even if it only goes to mach 60 and various things, in short, if you can stand arrogant chinese mc and young master written in MTL you can stand the story otherwise get ready for a migraine

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thanks for saving my time

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