you see, although i love the whole idea, I hate making this luffy cry, which u are repeatedly doing , and also like come on, he is someone who went there till whitebeards and held his secrets somewhat good, but the first time he gave his name to navy he event told him he is nika or something. and also why do u tell him weak. he sure is luffyyyy but he is already hella strong ok, but still he waves his emotions like they are nothing even after all this time under their brothers , making him a goon or a dog on steroids. anyways, don't make luffy cry and all, which him getting all nika everywhere
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I like your insight! I'll discuss it with my co writer! Thank you so much!
sorry man, just go on your own pace. I get that you are trying to write the ff different and all etc, but it's just that you have to maintain the pace at that.. too much negativity in small number of chapters on a lovable and joy giving character.... for no reason I am able to find is kinda off putting ... but still, do it at your own pace and I will still read it
