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Bianei_Velazquez
Bianei_VelazquezLv11yr
2023-12-06 08:25

Hola gracias por los capítulos de esta historia debo reconocer que son una de las pocas historias de one piece que me han agradado la trama es un poco diferente lo que lo hace emocionante los personajes tiene buen desarrollo y son interesantes más aún cuando se escriben los pensamientos o los sentimientos que se están experimentando las actualizaciones son un poco lentas al igual que el desarrollo de la historia pero la historia está bien escrita al igual que el mundo de one piece está tratando de mostrar espero poder seguir leyendo más este historia gracias

The Return Of Joyboy!

TheIntrovertRin
4.6
79 Chs

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TheIntrovertRin
TheIntrovertRinAuthor

¡Te agradecería que leyeras esta historia! ¡Muchas gracias! Espero que sigamos haciendo la historia y que os siga gustando. Perdón si las actualizaciones son demasiado lentas pero la extensión de los capítulos es mayor, ¿verdad? ¿Eso no equivale a al menos 4 capítulos por semana? No creo que pueda escribir más de 8000 palabras todos los días. Entonces, lamento ese aspecto.

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TheIntrovertRin
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In case of any questions regarding the story or other issues, you are welcome to comment below. Ah by the way, it will be no harem!! Also, the story won't be dropped and if I do drop it, I'll message it clearly.

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Royalmv
RoyalmvLv4

I have removed the whole fic as per as your request(you can check it yourself to confirm) sorry for the trouble and I apologize for my misdeeds ik I have been a shameless person to post a person's work without thier consent and I hope you can forgive me for my mistake

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Deimesu
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Luffy being a Moana wannabe is killing me.

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Yuki_978
Yuki_978Lv1

I love the idea of a Young Luffy, the child of Sea. It's awesome!!! Man this is so good, i cannot wait to see new chapters 😘✋ AND Let me tell you, this is awesome! Love the story, and oh the chaos luffy will bring. I wonder how marineford would go?

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R0B
R0BLv2

So boring and overated. We don't even have an mc. I don't want to read yet another fanfic that follows the story of one piece to a tea, but slightly diffrently. You will bore me to death.

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Flaiver
FlaiverLv4

I liked the story at the beginning, but it moves too slowly. I got to chapter 16 and the story is still about his childhood. At this rate, he will go to sea by chapter 50. The second thing that I didn’t like is, as for me, this is the secondary nature of everything that happens, I don’t know if it’s the case with me, but it’s like I’m reading an anime about life only with the One Piece theme. If you remove the water, I think 16 chapters will fit in 4-5 chapters. If not for the 2 problems that I described, I would put 5 but so 3.

1yr
Soul_Saiko
Soul_SaikoLv1

Sugoi! The chapter is so cool that I can't help but wait for more to keep coming. I really am falling in love with the story. It's as if like in each chapter there's something cool. I really love it. Plz keep writing. And also is it your theory about the original cannon?

1yr
Gamer_LAVI
Gamer_LAVILv4

Good story with luffy being nika and all man can't find any good nika fics if u guys can suggest

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Drimy
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Reveal spoiler

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Ayush_Rai_6153
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is it dropped ? h

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