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Nice start, would be better if there's more details specially the background of the boy, but it's great it gives the thrill like that edge moment, but as always there's room for improvement in the story such as grammar.

Spectral Serenade

Axelottle

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Thank you for being honest, and for supporting me I'll fix the grammatical errors so you can read it with ease. 🙂