Item: Orion's Odyssey - The New Dawn
Rating: 3.8
Author: Laughing_Fox_9871

Laughing_Fox_9871Lv11yr

2023-06-06 23:15

You developed story lightly but world building need more information. overall it is going in right direction but you still need to improve the worldbuilding in it you can watch world building videos online on you tube Great work keep writing.

Orion's Odyssey - The New Dawn

char

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62 Chs

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charAuthor

Thank you for the review. Yes, the worldbuilding needs some work, I agree. I have the broad sense of the world, but the nitty-gritty details need to be worked out for sure. I will work on it for sure.[img=recommend]

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ILovemyself_84Lv4

I‘M excited to start reading!☺️🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬

char:Thank you for the review. Yes, the worldbuilding needs some work, I agree. I have the broad sense of the world, but the nitty-gritty details need to be worked out for sure. I will work on it for sure.[img=recommend]

1yr

charAuthor

Do share your thoughts after reading xD

ILovemyself_84:I‘M excited to start reading!☺️🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬🥬

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Writing a self review here. 45 Chapter in now. Please review the work and provide feedback peeps. Need it to stay motivated. And if you like it, share the story xD. Peace Out.

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"Orion's Odyssey - The New Dawn" - a work of art. The events fold and unfold with suspense. The endings of each chapter is a cliff-hanger. KEEP IT COMING!

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An utter delight! The characters feel real, they might as well leap off the pages. And the plot? Oh, it had me spellbound! Sam's journey is both exciting and insightful. "Orion's Odyssey - The New Dawn" is a remarkable read that leaves an indelible impression.

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"Orion's Odyssey - The New Dawn" is an absolute masterpiece that fills every page with an electrifying thrill of defiance and innovation. The captivating characters, meticulously designed settings, and a story that fuses reality with fantasy, have me totally enchanted. This book is a good writing.

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it's not a real story. By that, I mean it's an Ai generated fiction.it lacks the human touch and I hate Ai generated stories 😑 😒 🙄 😤 😐 ....

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