Review Detail of DaoistKushMountain in The Dao Must Be Crazy

Shameless review from the Author. It won't be the best story out there, I'm an amateur writer with much to learn. Give me your critiques, I can take them. The MC got trapped inside a video game when he was 14, so its safe to say that he didn't develop as well as some of the readers. He's also an unreliable narrator and loves to hear the sound of his own voice. This world still has a lot to show so please stick with me through this journey. Let's unravel the story together.