This novel went from 5 stars to 1 star in a single Arc, so many things went wrong in Greece that it is difficult to list them, I will not say not to read it, but get ready for the Arch of Greece, I will drop this.

Spoiler below Honestly this story was going great and was quickly becoming one of my favorites but like @TheAngels said the greece arc ruined this story beyond repair (mc loses memory in a bs way, some hero wannabe takes over his body and now mc as a spirit can only watch as said body snatcher pipes his friend while he can only watch if that doesn’t say how far this story has fallen idk what else will )

Food Job author Really a good gamer fic and when mc goes in fate have him create his own noble phantasm and reality marble and if possible get true magic not from the start but at later down the line and training with shishou is must those primodial runes and her spearmanship is just too op to be passed out upon

I like everything about it. And I like the fact that you want to make this a long fanfic.

I story is good at the start. Recommend reading it. though i dropped it after the Greece Arc.It is the worst arc in the novel . It became unreadable after that

The story is good so far, but there are a lot of typos, and messing words, and I don’t think the Author is willing to correct anything after uploading the chapters.

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