As the person uploading on the author's behalf I will give this fic a full score. This fic is not yet complete and has about 85000 words of this review. From what I have read so far, this is a fantastic fic with excellent pacing, character development, worldbuilding, and protagonist. The protagonist is from a civilian family and has to work from the bottom to reach the top. He and his family are all original characters but they feel very relatable and realistic. I love the protagonist's relationship with his family. Izumi and Itachi are part of the core cast and they are great. The side characters are all very in character and lovable, from gai to Hidan. As for the main character, Kinjo, he may feel dry at times, but his personality and character shines through when it matters most. He is hardworking, yet willing to spend time for his friends and family to help them. He seems selfless but he makes selfish decisions if he thinks it's the right thing to do. He helps a lot, but doesn't completely throw himself away to do so. The main protagonist is unafraid to make changes because he believes that while the good guys won, he shouldn't turn a blind eye to the mistakes and tragedies of this world with the knowledge he has. So he tries to change things for the better. The author has hinted that there are consequences for this but so far, things do look better. How the author will proceed I am excited for. As for worldbuilding, there are no info dumps or stuff like that. The worldbuilding is done through the flow of events. Some interesting stuff here, some interesting facts there. Like for fuinjutsu and diplomacy in the recent chapters. They all feel well integrated and doesn't feel forced or break immersion. He posts every week so all in all, I give this a full score. Thank you for reading. and I hope you enjoy the story too!
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no romance ?
I asked him about it and he said probably in the future, but he's not comfortable writing romance when the main characters are children. later on in the fic
ThreshGasm:no romance ?
as long as it's not a story with 50 chapters and the Mc is still 12 years old I'm in
kin123:I asked him about it and he said probably in the future, but he's not comfortable writing romance when the main characters are children. later on in the fic
it's chapter 17 and the MC is 9, but author has mentioned he is doing more time skips and he'll probably be older fairly quickly. by chapter 50, he will probably be around sixteen, seventeen years old.
ThreshGasm:as long as it's not a story with 50 chapters and the Mc is still 12 years old I'm in
That's good enough
kin123:it's chapter 17 and the MC is 9, but author has mentioned he is doing more time skips and he'll probably be older fairly quickly. by chapter 50, he will probably be around sixteen, seventeen years old.
