I like the pretty unique idea of an obscurus MC. It is also great that u don’t take the usual route of an Harry Potter fanfic where harry takes one of the main plot spots but expand upon the more unexplored nuances of the Harry Potter world. The emotional turmoil inside the MC is also pretty well done. Not the usual “I am so super cold because I am the only person who ever suffered and now I will k*ll everybody because I am angry at the world”, but a Charakter who got close to broken and is trying to heal. Overall it is a story I would recommend, as it seems like the author is very thoughtful about how one could expand on the universe most Harry Potter fans came to appreciate, while giving us a unique and interesting story. To the author: I hope u continue writing this story :)
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