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yoshikage_kira9Lv131yr
2023-06-04 23:27

I really like the idea, I was attracted by your synopsis. Please don't drop this, it has potential.

Fate/Hollow

Godfire_Dragneel
4.5
32 Chs

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Godfire_Dragneel
Godfire_DragneelAuthor

I won't, my dear Padawan.

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Godfire_Dragneel
Godfire_DragneelAuthor

As the Author of this Fanfic, it's obligated to give myself Five stars. Anyway I'll answer every question asked in the comment section. I'll advise new comers that they MUST NOT Vote or provide power stones to my old fic. Only this one must you Vote, Comment and review it. Nonetheless. I'll continue with my business. First, I'll answer the most asked questions.. "Will there be a harem?" That's hard to answer cause the vision I had for this fic was for Icarus And few people to be the main focus in this fic. "Is this fic fast paced?" personally, I think it's slow as f*** That's one of the reasons I'm rewriting this fic. "Will there be romance?" If you're reader of my Previous novel, then you'll know that yes. There'll be Romance. "Will Icarus be Op?" This is the Nasuverse in the past. there are gods, divine beast, magic and many more. so it goes without saying that he will be Strong. But without Stomping anyone in an instant. "Will the Age of the God's reach the main timeline or will the Atlas Lostbelt happen?" Hm~ difficult to answer cause I didn't think that far, but I've thought of a alternate solution for the ending of this fic. If you have answers plz, ask! This is Godfire Signing off for now.

1yr

EnablingBarley
EnablingBarleyLv14

The writing is good, I have found no spelling mistakes also the English is good, the Grammar is also good. However the story is not for me, its not my cub of tea if you will. Even if the story is not for me i wont bomb it like many like to do in starting new stories. However if the Author keep this quality up, I'm sure the story will become good. Therefor I give the story a 4.2 in stars.

1yr
DaoistfwsfHm
DaoistfwsfHmLv13

The summary is completely inaccurate, and doesn’t reflect the story.

1yr
Blast_Niro
Blast_NiroLv4

This really is a downgraded version of fate/defiance.

1yr
Phanton
PhantonLv2

More More More More More More More More More More.

1yr
Great_Disaster
Great_DisasterLv1

Shameless review. You're one of my favorites Author's.

1yr
Vidhan_Bhardwaj
Vidhan_BhardwajLv4

Just showing the Book support i know this will turn out good 👍👍

1yr
Cedol7hp
Cedol7hpLv4

i like it. I want to know how icarus become stronger and when will he see his father again

1yr
Manmaman
ManmamanLv3

The writing mode is interesting I have already read another icaro fanfic in fate luckily and great work by the writer-san they don't look alike I am intrigued by the magic that the protagonist can develop considering the legend of icaro and the lore of fate I am excited hehe

1yr
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