Review Detail of Emrys_Herean in Tryst Under The War [BL, Omegaverse,Action]

In summary of my 20 comments for your 20 chapters, I love the story even though some scenarios are cliche you still succeed to twist it and writing something unexpected and original. The words are chosen well, and used well, as the emotions that each character has I can feel it and the design I can imagine it. But again, the spacing, the use of commas, the spelling (just a little bit), and the capitalization of i. Lastly, I have a recommendation for you or a tip maybe. you used deep or not too simple English words or not common to some or many readers, you also use some mythological entities out there, and many more. Therefore, I suggest you used to try to make a dictionary-like or when the chapter will end, on the last past you will put certain words and for example: Uriel- is the blah blah blah Rah- is the blah blah blah Husky- blah blah blah Enigma- blah blah blah And also try to add the words or the race you created in this novel, I forgot the name of the enemy they are fighting like the one starting with a, 4.4 this is my review for your novel "Tryst Under The War" with 20 chapters for now.