Absolute banger, pure perfection, totally not word-vomit. Jk, I am totally new to writing and there will be mistakes, but I think I learn somewhat quickly from my mistakes so it should get progressively better, I hope you give it a chance.

Gather 'round, my students, let me spin a tale, 'Bout a book called "Sorcerer's Tale," it'll set your sails, In the realm of magic, where legends take flight, A Dunmer's journey, to reach the highest height. In the land of Skyrim, where magic's in the air, This Dunmer's tale, it's beyond compare, With spells in their grasp, and wisdom so vast, The "Sorcerer's Tale," let's make this one last. In the heart of Skyrim, where the dragons take flight, A Dunmer's quest for power, in day and in night, Through tomes and through trials, they honed their skill, To become the most powerful mage, it's a thrill. In the land of Skyrim, where magic's in the air, This Dunmer's tale, it's beyond compare, With spells in their grasp, and wisdom so vast, The "Sorcerer's Tale," let's make this one last. The pages they turned, the spells they did weave, From novice to master, they'd never deceive, Their story's an inspiration, to all those who dare, To chase after greatness, in this magical affair. In the land of Skyrim, where magic's in the air, This Dunmer's tale, it's beyond compare, With spells in their grasp, and wisdom so vast, The "Sorcerer's Tale," let's make this one last. So remember, my students, in this world of dreams, "Sorcerer's Tale" shows life's not what it seems, In the heart of magic, let this story unveil, The Dunmer who became, the most powerful, set sail.

I like my Thalmor the same way I like my Uchihas- Dead and 20 feet down to earth -Tobirama Senju, Ex-Nidaime, Daedric prince of clan and race massacres

A FF with a lot of potential reminds me of the early days of Altering Skyrim, maybe I'm setting the bar too high? I don't know, but it's very interesting so far, it's definitely going to differ from AS in that here the character grows more normally, and I deduce that there will be no kingdom building, but it will be more focused on adventures. I love the logic with which he explains magic without departing from tradition, the writing is very good and the few errors improve as the chapters go by, the characters become endearing... in short, it's going very well and it looks better every time!!!

writing quality is decent, nothing too crazy, stability of updates seems very impressive, story development could have some improvement, character design is horrible for me. i do not like how the "115" year old acts like a teenager trying to act old, breaks the immersion for me completely. world background is obviously 5 stars (it's tamriel come on)

This feels more reading a walkthrough, MC does something - his stats slightly increase. There's really no plot that drives the story, and the bunch of OCs don't help to make this a believable Skyrim world.

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I fin the first 27+ chapters. The main problem is that the hero is Ms, and the work is highly concentrated on his achievements, which makes it look fake. + a lot of things are given to him too quickly and easily, there are no losses, no sense of value. The characters are not bad, but they look like animated backgrounds. It would be better if they were independent, had deeper character and didn’t look into the hero’s mouth.

The author has clearly put much time and effort into researching the background and lore of Skyrim the characters are very well depicted the story is excellent and the plot twists are very good I would recommend