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1st_Manga_KING
1st_Manga_KINGLv131yr
2023-06-01 08:15

Onto the critics: World background felt q bit lacking, well, can't expect much as it's just the initial chapters. Character design, not really upto my taste, though, it is well thought of and fleshed out. Flow of story: So far so good, coukd be better. Plots: Can't really say much as it's only the initial chaps. Tho, I think I can predict the future events, let's see if my guesses would be correct or would I meet with surprises. Overall: It's good so far and considering it's mage writing it, I think it would he considerably well. I recommend anyone who is willing to read a more like fun book, but at rhe same time smth quite close to game like with strong character emotions.

Only I Can See The End

Magecrafter
4.7
190 Chs

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Magecrafter
MagecrafterAuthor

Thanks for your detailed and critical review. Much appreciated.

1yr
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Magecrafter
MagecrafterAuthor

Author Bias included. I think readers should give this story a chance and see if they would like to go forward with it. No book is made for everyone, so I won't pretend like this is an exception. Reading a few chapters should allow you to get a good idea of what the story is about, but it has more depth than you realize. I'd advise you to read up to the fifth chapter, or maybe the 10th chapter, so as to make up your mind. A story is built upon layers, so I hope you will give this an honest try. Hopefully, you enjoy it. The more you read, the more depth you'll uncover. Also, if you genuinely enjoy my work, please support this novel by voting with your Power Stones, commenting, or even telling others about it. I appreciate all the help.

1yr

Ruby_banks02
Ruby_banks02Lv13

This is an awesome book by the author. Just like his other books, this one is unique on its own and I'm sure you all will be immersed in it. Give it a try...

1yr
master_of_luck
master_of_luckLv2

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1yr
BASTILLE
BASTILLELv13

I am someone very critic and picky with what I read, at the first chapters I was quite skeptical if I should continue reading but I’m glad I did.(It Gets way better after the first carachter development of the mc). grammar is near perfect, the world development is still in its beggining but we can also see that it’s not the typical apocalypse setting, albeit very similar. Update stability is more than perfect so far, with more than 1 chapter per day. The best part in my opinion is seeing the mcs growth, there are a lot of people that would make better use of his power but seeing the mc learning from his mistakes is way more rewarding to read. Also, the most important thing is that the chapters aren’t locked yet so read it while you can

1yr
Novelreader12333
Novelreader12333Lv14

The plot world building and character development so far is good. It is really interesting to see the character change as the story progresses like and actual person would. If u just want a story where the mc will be the same and not change this isn’t it. However if u want a story that shows how people would react to and apocalypse and to experiencing the future then this is for u

1yr
Asekhame
AsekhameLv14

have the novel stop, it being two months.

11mth
HaracasAye
HaracasAyeLv4

Story has a good idea and premise but the author has tried to take on too much all at once. On one hand this novel is a fast paced, high action apocalypse story that is well suited for the webnovel medium while on the other it takes itself too seriously whenever the author deems it necessary for the mc to go through another one of his 'character development' moments. I mean cmon, how am I supposed to care about what happens to characters that were introduced a handful of chapters ago? You would have to be supremely good at characterisation to pull that off and even then nothing is guaranteed. These moments stick out like a sore thumb throughout the whole story for me and lower the overall standard of the novel. Fast paced, high action or a restrained more grounded approach, I would advise the author to choose just one and not try to stick their finger in multiple pies.

1yr
NitrogenousBeing
NitrogenousBeingLv14

Review at about chapter 38: So I’m interested in the story, but the writing is killing my desire to continue. There are too many useless meaningless redundant cliché flowery and abstract phrases. Also don’t get me started on the stupid repeating blocks of useless thoughts when the MC panics. A good rule of thumb: any more than three identical repeats is too many. The MCs emotions often aren’t relatable. Plus, the author tends to jump to the reveal a little faster than he should, which I find relatable because he’s trying to fit 20 more reveals behind it. Anyway, the grammar is good and the story has a plan behind it, but please work on the prose. Make sure there’s a reason for flowery words or don’t use them. Keep your sentences simple and direct. Thanks.

1yr
Fool_King
Fool_KingLv12

Good novel

1yr
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