Sigh. This is beyond stupid. Someone transmigrates into Whitebeard and gains a system that heals his healness and brings him back to his peak. So in an instant he became the strongest in the world without any struggle.Then he smartly decides to rescue Ace from Impel Down instead of Marineford. But, he forgets about the lift. Then he wastes time recruiting 10 people from level 5. And while he is watching the criminals at level 5 fighting with each other, they take Ace to Marineford -_- Dropping this book. I'm sure it'll be one big disappointment.

Low quality translation. It's clear that English is not the translators 1st language and that they never properly learned it. English is also a 2nd language for me, but even I can easily notice the many grammatical errors and spelling mistakes that this translation is filled with...

No matter what it is, even a gem like novels, let's say the hobbit, naruto, harry potter or even classic ones could get spoiled as soon as chinese touches it, or it's written chinese way. The arrogance in every sentence makes me vomit if i read more than 2 chapters. And of course fake votes, cause I can't imagine that a proper reader can stand this

90% of this novel is reaction like uhh ah unbelievable how is this possible cant believe. Everybody is always in shock or denial. Rest is oke. I now this is just a translation so 3/5 is more than fair.

Hello there, Author is here. Shamelessly give 5star review. I also want to thank you guys for all the support, in comment, review, power stone, and ultimately in p@treon. you should know that every support count and make me glad that the think i do get some appreciation from you guys, so thank you :Dalso more importantly hope you enjoy reading the story ;-)

Reveal spoiler

a bad translation of a Chinese fanfic, the protagonist has a white beard and has a system, he becomes the most powerful and does nothing, this is not a joke, the protagonist is useless

Disappointing

can't wait for more also is this MTL still ongoing or it drop ?

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