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Yoad_Rodriguez
Yoad_RodriguezLv31yr
2023-08-09 08:15

Amazing story, very well written; haven't seen a dingle grammatical error, the story progresses slow but in a good way, the MC is very well done and feels like a real person; DC characters personalities match original works perfectly.I really like that you made it so MC forgot all about DC, most stories don't do that and the MC focuses too much on maintaining the plot. Since the MC didn't know much at the start it feels like he's actually learning and progressing.I also like that you arent just sticking to the plot of young justice but instead mixing in a bit of your own. Other stories focus too much on the original material and it gets boring.The word count on these chapters is also crazy, each one of these is easily three times as long as normal chapters for other stories. I think you could tone down the dialogue a little bit but overall its amazing.Honestly the concept and execution is amazing and very well though out.

DC/Young Justice: Colors

Geo_Ruler
4.8
29 Chs

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Geo_Ruler
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Thanks a lot for the review! And I’ll see about the dialogue.

1yr
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