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Gryphindoros
GryphindorosLv141yr
2023-06-02 08:12

the concept is good the execution and terminology is horrendous. things such as prefects being listed as headmaster, or heads of houses being interchanably called deans and other things. it needs a really good editor. this could be an amazing fan fiction. how it is now its like nails on a chalkboard for me I can't keep going.

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Charlottess
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If you're from Britain you're comfortable using 'perfekts', I'm from a completely different country and so I'm comfortable with terms like: dean and so on. If it pains you to read it, then don't read it. I don't see the problem.

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