Review Detail of The_Puffer in Unheard Wishes: A Tale of Desires
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Mc is just pathetic. No scum, no pervert, no worst, no evil... Just pure pathetic. The story itself is quite good and makes you want to ready more but the constant stupidity of mc is being reminded to you nearly every chapter. Especially after the tsunade arc.
Unheard Wishes: A Tale of Desires
Over_The_Moon69
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Bro were at 250+ chapters and the MC is just absolutely f*cking garbage I din't understand why you keep writing a winpy self consious incopetent crybaby with 0 self esteem he's constantly crying moping and running away from his issues the only one whose even somewhat gotten it into his stupid thick skull is Makima and she more or less had to keep telling him over and over again hhe's so f*cking r*tarded
Over_The_Moon69:you did not inform of any of your points, went through your timeline to check, most of your comments are about your reaction to something funny with words or a gif. and then straight to the review. and once again you said that the mc' actions make you and other reader look down on him. which actions it can't be that every single one them makes you feel that way. there has to be a problem atleast give one example to understand the problem. and after tsunade arc he did take a hit from that situation so he reacted to it naturally, isn't that normal? it was clear from the start that he has no idea about women, so the whole story is based on his development on that part, and when he moves forward the mistakes he makes will push him back and he'll learn from them. but obviously the mistakes will show effect on him at the moment like with tsunade, something that makes you look at him as a worm at every chapter. it is clear that you guys don't like this type of mc, your type is a murder hobo that can r* pe women without batting an eye, you like the mcs who have a problem that is solved in 5 chapters. that isn't how it works for Adam, especially since he is being forced down a path from the start. but pretty sure you did not notice that either. cause you are too busy with looking at way things are rather than thinking why they are that way.
Artemis099:Ready for the third chapter? The next one for Synthetic is about to be finish
I already informed you of them. The problem is him acting the way that makes many readers look down on mc like is a worm at nearly EVERY chapter. Which only got worse after tsunade arc.
Over_The_Moon69:Well, next time I would appreciate some more explanation aside from just words, you say he is pathetic at least tell me which part so I can see the issue. Anyway, I am certain you aren't reading this anymore. So, that's that.
For example he blames himself for having s*x with womans for wishes. And the way women acts only amplifies this. Yes it was his wish but he cant do anything to reverse or stop it. So no crying over spilled Milk. Instead of crying about it, he could've do his best for the others that needs to sleep with him in order for their wishes to be granted. He could've acted profesional about it and clearly state that it is not in his controll but he still wants the best for them. Yes i know he said it wasnt his fault to them but it went right over their heads and they still acted like it was his fault. If they still blamed him He should've stood his ground and say "it is a transaction woman, nobody is forcing you. But clearly you need it. I want to help, but my Boss prevents me from helping you for free and there is nothing i can do about it. So its either you sleep with me or leave and dont waste my time."
Over_The_Moon69:Well, next time I would appreciate some more explanation aside from just words, you say he is pathetic at least tell me which part so I can see the issue. Anyway, I am certain you aren't reading this anymore. So, that's that.
you did not inform of any of your points, went through your timeline to check, most of your comments are about your reaction to something funny with words or a gif. and then straight to the review. and once again you said that the mc' actions make you and other reader look down on him. which actions it can't be that every single one them makes you feel that way. there has to be a problem atleast give one example to understand the problem. and after tsunade arc he did take a hit from that situation so he reacted to it naturally, isn't that normal? it was clear from the start that he has no idea about women, so the whole story is based on his development on that part, and when he moves forward the mistakes he makes will push him back and he'll learn from them. but obviously the mistakes will show effect on him at the moment like with tsunade, something that makes you look at him as a worm at every chapter. it is clear that you guys don't like this type of mc, your type is a murder hobo that can r* pe women without batting an eye, you like the mcs who have a problem that is solved in 5 chapters. that isn't how it works for Adam, especially since he is being forced down a path from the start. but pretty sure you did not notice that either. cause you are too busy with looking at way things are rather than thinking why they are that way.
The_Puffer:I already informed you of them. The problem is him acting the way that makes many readers look down on mc like is a worm at nearly EVERY chapter. Which only got worse after tsunade arc.
I dont comment about bad thing mostly because i would like to still give the story a chance despite its downsides. But when the bads overtake goods too much that it becomes unbearable, i Just write what i think at the end with a review. Besides what i Said about that "i already Said them" ment in the review. If you analyze my words i did tell them in it.
Over_The_Moon69:you did not inform of any of your points, went through your timeline to check, most of your comments are about your reaction to something funny with words or a gif. and then straight to the review. and once again you said that the mc' actions make you and other reader look down on him. which actions it can't be that every single one them makes you feel that way. there has to be a problem atleast give one example to understand the problem. and after tsunade arc he did take a hit from that situation so he reacted to it naturally, isn't that normal? it was clear from the start that he has no idea about women, so the whole story is based on his development on that part, and when he moves forward the mistakes he makes will push him back and he'll learn from them. but obviously the mistakes will show effect on him at the moment like with tsunade, something that makes you look at him as a worm at every chapter. it is clear that you guys don't like this type of mc, your type is a murder hobo that can r* pe women without batting an eye, you like the mcs who have a problem that is solved in 5 chapters. that isn't how it works for Adam, especially since he is being forced down a path from the start. but pretty sure you did not notice that either. cause you are too busy with looking at way things are rather than thinking why they are that way.
And I dont like mc's that their problems are solved in 5 chapters. Its more like, i think that you dont have to make mcs a retard Just to give them a character development. They can act like a normal human but the things they went through could change them. Not necessarily good or bad. I have read few stories like that so i know it can happen.
Over_The_Moon69:you did not inform of any of your points, went through your timeline to check, most of your comments are about your reaction to something funny with words or a gif. and then straight to the review. and once again you said that the mc' actions make you and other reader look down on him. which actions it can't be that every single one them makes you feel that way. there has to be a problem atleast give one example to understand the problem. and after tsunade arc he did take a hit from that situation so he reacted to it naturally, isn't that normal? it was clear from the start that he has no idea about women, so the whole story is based on his development on that part, and when he moves forward the mistakes he makes will push him back and he'll learn from them. but obviously the mistakes will show effect on him at the moment like with tsunade, something that makes you look at him as a worm at every chapter. it is clear that you guys don't like this type of mc, your type is a murder hobo that can r* pe women without batting an eye, you like the mcs who have a problem that is solved in 5 chapters. that isn't how it works for Adam, especially since he is being forced down a path from the start. but pretty sure you did not notice that either. cause you are too busy with looking at way things are rather than thinking why they are that way.
your logic doesn't sense. he want's create harem but why should he feel guilty about. he should be upfront about it to every women, hey I want to make harem.
Over_The_Moon69:you did not inform of any of your points, went through your timeline to check, most of your comments are about your reaction to something funny with words or a gif. and then straight to the review. and once again you said that the mc' actions make you and other reader look down on him. which actions it can't be that every single one them makes you feel that way. there has to be a problem atleast give one example to understand the problem. and after tsunade arc he did take a hit from that situation so he reacted to it naturally, isn't that normal? it was clear from the start that he has no idea about women, so the whole story is based on his development on that part, and when he moves forward the mistakes he makes will push him back and he'll learn from them. but obviously the mistakes will show effect on him at the moment like with tsunade, something that makes you look at him as a worm at every chapter. it is clear that you guys don't like this type of mc, your type is a murder hobo that can r* pe women without batting an eye, you like the mcs who have a problem that is solved in 5 chapters. that isn't how it works for Adam, especially since he is being forced down a path from the start. but pretty sure you did not notice that either. cause you are too busy with looking at way things are rather than thinking why they are that way.
BigDad:your logic doesn't sense. he want's create harem but why should he feel guilty about. he should be upfront about it to every women, hey I want to make harem.
How can someone be that much of a b****? Is your MC a self-insert and you are hurt that people call you pathetic or something?
Over_The_Moon69:hmm, sure.
it's not a si, the reason I am not responding to the other guy is cute he hasn't read the thing. The problem isn't that the mc can't make up his mind on the harem. he is sure he wants it, but the way he meets women is the problem. if you had read synopsis you should understand that much if you have basic Intelligence. The problem is that the doubts that crop up with this method. The mc thought that maybe it won't work because of how he met them initially as they have this idea in their head of him being an vile person who uses other's problems to satisfy his needs. yes I am talking in past sense cause they got over this already in fic and the relationships are working well. that is basically what he is trying to talk about without understanding the reasoning. though I know it would be a drag for most who don't like that type of stuff, I can't say much about it after over 200 chapters have passed since the incident they are talking about.
IgnisPrimus:How can someone be that much of a b****? Is your MC a self-insert and you are hurt that people call you pathetic or something?
The reason I called you a b word was because when I looked at all of the reviews that was not 5 starts you sounded a bit butt hurt. But now that I have read more or less all of the reviews and have read some more of the story, I can see why you think they are stupid, but I can also see the points on the reviewers side. You did not really make things obvious when you wrote the stuff that people wrote negative reviews about(at least in their minds to didn't), and because this is webnovel and we all have the attention span of a goldfish (myself included) I can understand why they did not try to make sense of it all. Because they had already made there minds of the story overall, and since it took a bit to long for you to "fix" the MC aka made him go through some character development. It was more or less too late for them to get into the story again. At least that is my opinion of what happened. Ps I am sorry I called you the b word.
Over_The_Moon69:it's not a si, the reason I am not responding to the other guy is cute he hasn't read the thing. The problem isn't that the mc can't make up his mind on the harem. he is sure he wants it, but the way he meets women is the problem. if you had read synopsis you should understand that much if you have basic Intelligence. The problem is that the doubts that crop up with this method. The mc thought that maybe it won't work because of how he met them initially as they have this idea in their head of him being an vile person who uses other's problems to satisfy his needs. yes I am talking in past sense cause they got over this already in fic and the relationships are working well. that is basically what he is trying to talk about without understanding the reasoning. though I know it would be a drag for most who don't like that type of stuff, I can't say much about it after over 200 chapters have passed since the incident they are talking about.
this explains the situation very well. wasn't really bothered about the b word if you have read the negative reviews and the comments below when I tried to explain the situation I've probably been called worse things. though it is what it is. At least I know what to write and what avoid moving forward. still, thanks for reading.
IgnisPrimus:The reason I called you a b word was because when I looked at all of the reviews that was not 5 starts you sounded a bit butt hurt. But now that I have read more or less all of the reviews and have read some more of the story, I can see why you think they are stupid, but I can also see the points on the reviewers side. You did not really make things obvious when you wrote the stuff that people wrote negative reviews about(at least in their minds to didn't), and because this is webnovel and we all have the attention span of a goldfish (myself included) I can understand why they did not try to make sense of it all. Because they had already made there minds of the story overall, and since it took a bit to long for you to "fix" the MC aka made him go through some character development. It was more or less too late for them to get into the story again. At least that is my opinion of what happened. Ps I am sorry I called you the b word.
And now that I have reread my comment. I have to say that I am very sorry you had to have see my horrible ADHD grammar.
Over_The_Moon69:this explains the situation very well. wasn't really bothered about the b word if you have read the negative reviews and the comments below when I tried to explain the situation I've probably been called worse things. though it is what it is. At least I know what to write and what avoid moving forward. still, thanks for reading.
IgnisPrimus:And now that I have reread my comment. I have to say that I am very sorry you had to have see my horrible ADHD grammar.image