webnovel
Anas_AsBEIY
Anas_AsBEIYLv11yr
2023-07-27 06:43

A story that talks about Naruto in a brother Kakshi from the father his mother is the cousin of Kato Dan Bigger than Kakashi It seems that he is incarnate, but not much about the character The writing style is great And his strength too Shazoni seems to have made her big and she is from the Kakashi generation It's strange how Shissoi with Itachi and they're very small.

SHIMMERING MIST : HATAKE SI (Naruto)

Drkest
3.7
41 Chs

Liked by 1 people

LIKE
empty img

No replies. Be the first!

Other Reviews
Ruckducker
RuckduckerLv4

The MC is a huge disappointment he’s reincarnated but doesn’t change anything even letting his father die and the power scaling is sooooooo wonky he was able to make one of the Sanin bleed while opening 2 of the 8 gates but against one of the seven swordsmen plus mei he had to open 5 of the gates and still got absolutely destroyed and was an inch from death. I wouldn’t recommend it which is a shame as it is high quality writing for this app but mostly everything else about this story ruined it for me.

1yr

Lackada1sical
Lackada1sicalLv4

Evaluation: Below AverageWQ: Multiple gramm errors which can be improved on. Monotonous dialogues/interaction & redundant thought process (pertaining to the original story). 2/5SD: With a slow to average pace of development and it also lacks MC & story progression since author-san decided to follow cannon/plot which is lackluster. 3/5CD: MC is a transmigrate/reincarnate but his foreknowledge & adult mentality are lacking. Author-san is too scared to damage the storyline nor plot. MC is too passive as there are tons of ways to vilify the elder councils or decision of Hokoge but still refrain from doing so. His foreknowledge & earth/previous life experiences is wasted. 2/5US: Chapters are short, stability of update isn't up to speed. 2/5WB: There's nothing new as author-san decided that MC follows/observe cannon. 3/5Don't be discouraged by the reviews but take it as a challenge to do better. Kudos to author-san and well wishes! xD

1yr
Jude_Ovie
Jude_OvieLv4

Was enjoyable at first, really liked it till the author felt the main character should be madara's pawn. Story when down hill after that and I'm sure it won't recover.

1yr
0dinson
0dinsonLv5

Reveal spoiler

1yr
reckless_soul1453
reckless_soul1453Lv3

The story is moving pretty well as of now. I am big fan of author's other work HP: Magical Life. The characters are well written, hoping to see a better kakashi this time, with or without kanabi bridge incident. A Kakshi without the sharingan would be much better....

1yr
malhiharjot
malhiharjotLv3

How to turn his own Good story into garbage you can learn from this, lol I am your white shadow and denjo shimura guy did sacrifice his eye to cast genjutsu to come back and even without he have strong strength of air vacuum ninja art

1yr
Rk6T
Rk6TLv4

Reveal spoiler

1yr
1stDrunkenImmortal
1stDrunkenImmortalLv14

Trash after like 20 chapters.

1yr
QueLeo
QueLeoLv1

Reveal spoiler

1yr
DarkWolf_27
DarkWolf_27Lv13

I was finding it decent in the beginning then the power scaling became extremely shakey and kinda ruined it for me

1yr
Related Stories

Shinigami: Medicine Can't Save The Soul Reaper Society

Senju Makoto, known to many as "Brother Makoto," is a specially invited doctor by the Women's Shinigami Association. He’s a master in gynecology, specializing in infertility and reproductive health. He holds the position of Vice-Captain in the Fourth Division and is the most desired man in the Eleventh Division. He ranks second in the list of the top ten most popular Shinigami in the Seireitei (the first place is vacant). He is also a distinguished guest in the four noble families and the wielder of the most powerful tree-based Zanpakuto—"Shinro Bansho." Medicine and the art of spiritual healing are my passions. I am willing to tirelessly save the lost and suffering souls, contributing my humble efforts to the prosperity of the Soul Society… Of course, if medical skills can no longer save the Soul Society, perhaps drawing my sword wouldn’t be such a bad option. "Shinro Bansho" -------------------------------------------------------- Disclaimer: I am not the author of this novel and hold no rights to the original work. This translation is created purely as a fan project for entertainment purposes only.I encourage readers to support the original author and their work. OG title: 死神：学医拯救不了尸魂界- book cover not mine Read 50+ chapters ahead as a patron ========================= Patreon: patreon.com/JustaPasserby

Lin11111 · Anime & Comics
4.8
168 Chs

Konoha's Medical Ninja: One Punch to beat up Madara

(T/N: There is now a Patreon for this work, and any new work I add will be dropped there first. check it out for an early release of up to 30 chapters edited smoothly. https://www.patreon.com/INeedRest) Ps: I'm not the original writer for this, this was edited by me. ******************* Traveling to the world of Hokage, Kamiyo Colt witnessed the chaos of the Nine Tails firsthand. Without any special powers initially, he planned to develop quietly and survive until the Infinite Tsukuyomi. However, when he first trained his Chakra, his system finally activated. The system's rules were simple: By healing others, he could gain random attributes and skills. "Heal Uzumaki Naruto to receive pure Ashura Chakra!" "Heal Uchiha Shisui to gain his bloodline talent!" "Heal Sasuke Uchiha to obtain pure Indra Chakra!" In this way, Colt steadily developed his abilities over more than ten years. During the Fourth Ninja World War, when the ninja coalition saw him suddenly knock out the Six Paths Madara with a single punch, he looked innocently back at them. "What? I'm a medical ninja. Doesn't it make sense to defeat him with one punch?"

INeedRest · Anime & Comics
4.7
343 Chs

Reborn As Papa Silva

I’ve had my fair share of weird wake-ups, but opening my eyes in Black Clover as some no-name extra? That’s a new one, and let me tell you—it’s not exactly the dream reincarnation scenario. Turns out, I’m Sebastian Silva, a guy so insignificant he’s barely a footnote in the series. Oh, and did I mention I’m the father of Noelle Silva and the husband of Acier Silva, the most badass woman in the Clover Kingdom? Yeah, talk about pressure. The kids hate me, my wife barely acknowledges me, and my role in the family is pretty much non-existent. But now that I’ve got my past life’s memories and a second chance, I’m not about to let things slide. With Acier on her deathbed, family dysfunction through the roof, and powerful players lurking in the shadows, I’ve got a lot on my plate. Saving my wife? Reconnecting with my children? Staying under the radar of the Wizard King and some seriously dangerous enemies? It’s not the easiest transmigration, but hey—we’ll live with it. *NOTE: Although all chapters will be written by me, to maintain daily upload, and not lower quality, because I have many time commitments like university, work, etc. Chapter's will be subjected to revision and editing through Grammarly AI.

hmak27230 · Anime & Comics
4.6
63 Chs

Sis-Con with Dimensional Chat Group

10 chapters / week This is a work of fiction. Names, characters, business, events and incidents are the products of the author's imagination. Any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, or actual events is purely coincidental. --- He had been reincarnated, he thought that he didn't cheat until suddenly he noticed someone invite him on a group chat. [Do you wish to join Dimensional Chat Group?] MC: "Accept!" --------------------------------------------- Cover not mine, it's from anime Yosuga no Sora --------------------------------------------- Grammar sometimes sucks but bear with it. https://discord.gg/Q3MFzds If you want to tell me there is a grammar mistake. --------------------------------------------- https://www.patreon.com/akikan40 Maybe I'll be full of energy to write your favorite fanfic.

akikan40 · Anime & Comics
4.6
2206 Chs
Login