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VoidSlay
VoidSlayLv41yr
2023-06-23 17:33

I believe your story idea is rather distinctive and holds promise. However, I would suggest improving your writing style and utilizing Grammarly for assistance. [img=recommend]

MAKING A FIRST RMMORPG GAME ON EARTH

Lordwlesh
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Lordwlesh
LordwleshAuthor

Hehe, the author's review which obviously will be a five-star anyway.I am very thankful for your support and love for this work guys, please review and vote if you like the story I want to have at least 20 reviews and 50 power stone target please help me to achieve it and also I will update three or four chapters on Saturday or Sunday till then happy reading guys

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BrookeCandy
BrookeCandyLv3

Interesting. This story has potential! I hope it doesn’t get dropped.

1yr
Zenithnovels
ZenithnovelsLv1

Hello, I am hoping to create a platform for authors and would love for you to join. There is a 70% compensation for authors from all revenue and a contest at my webpage(My username), along with a discord at the bottom of the webpage. I hope to see you there!

1yr
Czarny_Flesh
Czarny_FleshLv14

Interesting story idea. I'm looking forwards more chapters to get clearer view, if this book would keep going as good as it is now.

1yr
Anant_8235
Anant_8235Lv1

A great story, it worldbuiliding, character development is good and its way of suspensful writing is also kinda great, i hope the author keeps on writing and don't droop it half way. It is worth giving a try. Author i also have a question will this novel have players POV or not . Good Luck author

1yr
chronosia
chronosiaLv10

I liked the novel but the capitalized sentences are horrible for reading. I've given up on several novels for this reason and it would be nice if there were more capitalized sentences, although the concept of the novel is interesting.

1yr
CrazyZoneKO
CrazyZoneKOLv4

it has some potential if the author manages to keep the story somewhat realistic like some hate on the mc or if the game feels way too real and the players lose their most loved deckomon and fall to somewhat depression... maybe make an event that whoever is in the top 10 gets a ressurection item so the players wilk try their hardest.

1yr
No_One_1398
No_One_1398Lv14

This book is completely unreadable, considering its lack of grammatical coherence. The author most definitely is not qualified to write a book in English, in fact, Chinese MTL’s are of a significantly higher quality… and that’s a low bar…

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