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KingLettuce
KingLettuceLv21yr
2023-06-22 14:24

The fanfic was pretty enjoyable to read but I still don’t have a solid opinion on it, this to me is more like a 4.7 in its current state but overall since it is still enjoyable I will give it a 4.8. Even with the little errors here and there the story has potential to do pretty good or go south, so good luck Author and keep up the good work!!!!!!! ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… …………………………………………………………………………

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BurgerNoTomatoes
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So here's my brutally honest review as of Chapter 12, so do note things may have changed by the time you read this.(This is my opinion ONLY, so it's truly up to you if you like it or not): The Goods: - The update rate is impressive to say the least, I know how hard it is to write and as such it's amazing just how fast the chapters are being pumped out. - The wide use of OC's is something that I like, and it allows the fic to have it's own ground to stand on without focusing strictly on canon, bringing a sense of fresh air and potential for original arcs, this in addition to the MC arriving before canon. The only worry I have is that it'll be too much OC's to keep track of, and as such most would be 1 dimensional and have robotic personalities. -The bloody dragonkin MC of course. - The including of a childhood arc for an isekai MC. Some may not like it and would like to jump straight into canon, but that wouldn't make sense in my opinion. So the childhood arc was pretty nice and executed at an OK level. The Bads: -I'm not sure they're related, but the authors rate of releasing chapters comes with the consequence of writing quality. Frequent incorrect grammar, missed and incomplete sentences/words, the works. I'm not one to talk, but I think if the chapters are given more time for polish instead of being pumped out as fast as possible (I'm guessing here), that'd be great and it'll make the story much better and more readable/professional! Conclusion: I greatly recommend the story, it has potential and if the author improves as he writes whilst taking delicate care of the MC from steamrolling mindlessly the entire story, it'll be amazing. Writing Quality: 3/5 Update Stability: 5/5 Story Development: 5/5 (Not long enough to get an accurate score but 5 for now) Character Design: 5/5 World Background: 5/5 Thank you for the fic and wish you good luck Author!

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