Item: there are so many bad decisions here
Rating: 2.8
Author: PengZ

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2023-06-21 21:07

Your story has potential but it's unreadable due to your poor writing. Get yourself someone who could proofread or edit for you and for sure this story will be a great hit. Hope you take my review as a building criticism rather than a malicious one. Good luck with your future and keep doing you.

there are so many bad decisions here

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